West Street story
A poem I wrote recently about an infamous street in Brighton. Constructive feedback welcome, since finishing it I realise the ending doesn’t exactly make sense 🙂
In his bed he lay listening to the pipes dripping
He nursed a heavy head and the lights were still spinning
Dark shadows climbed the walls, crimson lipped bottles marked his fall
from grace and a night of cheap thrills, lacy brief encounters and
bumbling sex on a memory foam mattress
They’d met eyes under the red glow of a slot machine
Sticky floors, locked jaws and 90’s cheese set the scene
She smiled at him with a mouth full of knives
Breathed: ‘Im Natalie, wanna give this a try?’
Two games deep in Trivial Pursuit and he’d forgotten his beau
Thought he’d take a gamble and grabbed their coats to go
He cackled at the West Street wonders: vomit, kebabs and inevitable shags
She couldn’t help feeling this was part of his act
Another Brighton lad, a cad lacking tact
He slurred: “This one’s on me”, clutching tins of cider for 99p
So she slipped his wallet from his jeans while he hailed a taxi
A scribbled rizla where Natalie had lay,
She wrote her digits plus call me, winky face, thanks babes
She’d left him with a red neck he’d deny for weeks
Who was he fooling? He’d always been a cheat
But this time it felt different, dare he say divine?
He’d fallen for the unravelling of minds, then bodies entwined
Natalie rolled home on a wave from the night before
Holes in her stockings and her mouth tasted raw
She thought of Dave and his slow sexy drawl
Wished she could recall if he’d seemed into her at all
Was he half way genuine?
He’s no gentleman, that was clear. But she kinda liked his whisper in her ear:
“You feeling a night cap? My place aint far from here.”
The sex weren’t bad but she’d left a fake number
Gone with his cards, cash and phone whilst he was still in a slumber
Skipping through the streets flashing her slice of knives
She couldn’t remember when she’d felt more alive
But to her horror his iPhone began to vibrate, up flashed ‘my babe’
She stopped dead in the street and gawped at his love’s face
She had a sinister smile Natalie knew she could place
Back at Dave’s the coin had dropped
Along with another fifty quid, he swear he’d been robbed
He shrugged the thought off and gave Natalie a text, said ‘thanks for a great night, when we meeting next?’